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[Quintilian]

A free Elysian Fields
We departed from a world of tyrants,
who's hurt and woe brought dismay;
A friend sought a new world
beyond a life of chains.
Hurray, Hurray, hurray
for our Elysian Fields!

On that very day he sealed his fate,
the forums fate is made clear;
A life worth living,
A life worth dying
for!

Whether it is noble to surrender,
Or if a life of labor is worth a pinch of salt;
Still we shout, hurray, hurray, hurray
for our Elysian Fields!

Upon this day forward,
we've sealed each others fate
No one can stop what's soon to be!
Our Sovereign site this day!

@Memento Mori
@Suigin Trismegistus
@Depresso
@Nosecel_
A @Actualized
@Myst
@Shinrinken
@GGWP
@MAGONIA​

 

[Quintilian]

Torn from a forums tyrant
within this cyber sky,
we form a new dominion
a site of sovereign 'say!

God bless our friends who's lives are in your hand this day,
Within every waking moments and through life's dismays.
No matter what is said we shout
hurray, hurray, hurray, hurray
for our free Elysian Fields!

We shout with proud disdain,
no man nor his henchman,
will take our rights away!
Oppose, oppose, oppose, oppose
for a free and sovereign say!

Upon this sunny day,
we crown ourselves freeman
of these digital plains;
our actions have spoken thunder
to those who's power has become their chains.
Uphold, Uphold, Uphold, Uphold
For our Elysian Fields this day!
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[Quintilian]

I've tried to keep it close, with faults of course.

 

[Suigin Trismegistus]

I generated it before I realized you modeled after Joseph Warren's Free America, and I'm out of free credits.

 

[Quintilian]

I generated it before I realized you modeled after Joseph Warren's Free America, and I'm out of free credits.

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That was very lovely, I greatly appreciate it, what site did you use?

 

[Suigin Trismegistus]

That was very lovely, I greatly appreciate it, what site did you use?

makesong.com

 

[Quintilian]

makesong.com

Thank you dearly

 

[Quintilian]

@Suigin Trismegistus