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Kaelen's Backstory
In the bleak expanse where the Veilspire Mountains pierce a sky bereft of stars, Kaelen was born under a crimson moon, its light staining the frostlike blood. His eyes, sharp against his white-tanned skin, marked him as something apart—a child of omen, whispered by the Duskwind Clan to be kissed by forces beyond mortal ken. Raised in mist-shrouded valleys where twisted pines clawed at the heavens, Kaelen learned to hunt before he could dream, his senses sharpened bya land that devoured the careless. His human parents—Torren, a grizzled warrior, and Maevra, a herbalist with a survivor’s grit—taught him the blade’s discipline and the wild’s mercy ,but they could not shield him from the shadows that seemed to follow his steps.
At fourteen, Kaelen’s life changed with the arrival of Jian-Zhou, a Tian Xia ranger whose presence was as fleeting as a storm’s edge. Jian-Zhou was a planes-walker, his weathered face etched with tales of worlds beyond Golarion, his hornbow humming with a power that seemed to bend the air itself. He had crossed the Veilspire tracking a shadow-wraith, an undead horror that spoke the Shae language—a tongue of sibilant whispers, born of the shadowplane and carried by its restless dead. Jian-Zhou found Kaelen after the boy survived an encounter with the wraith, his red eyes unblinking as he described its voice, a sound like glass breaking in the dark. Recognizing a rare affinity, Jian-Zhou took Kaelen as a student.
By firelight, Jian-Zhou taught Kaelen the hornbow’s art, its propulsive force a song of wind and death. With each draw, he wove the Shae language into Kaelen’s mind—a language not of people but of shadows, its syllables sharp and cold, like frost on a blade. “The Shae is the voice of the unmade,” Jian-Zhou said, his Tian Xia accent curling around the words. “To speak it is to court the void. To wield this bow is to hunt its children.” Kaelen learned swiftly, his thick hands mastering the bow’s curve, his crimson gaze piercing the dark as if born to it.
Kaelen’s youth was haunted by portents. His long black hair drank the light, and his hollowed cheeks gave him a spectral air, as if the shadows he hunted claimed a piece of him. At seventeen, hestumbled upon a shrine of obsidian, its altar slick with a substancethat pulsed like a dying heart. The Shae whispers grew louder there, offering power for a price unspoken. Kaelen fled, but his dreams became plagued by visions of a world drowned in shadow, where he stood alone, blades drawn. Jian-Zhou, ever cryptic, warned him of the Abomination Vaults—a labyrinth beneath the earth where the Shae’s masters stirred, their hunger tied to an ancient Umbral Pact that seemed to know Kaelen’s name.
By twenty, Kaelen was a hunter unmatched, by his peers his cold steel longsword and shortsword weaving death through his Twin Takedown, his Flurry Edge making him a phantom on the battlefield. The hornbow, Jian-Zhou’s legacy, was his truest weapon, its piercingwind felling foes from afar. Jian-Zhou vanished when Kaelen was nineteen, leaving only a jade-carved arrowhead and a planes-walker’s warning: “The Vaults will call. Answer, or be consumed.” The Abomination Vaults began to dominate Kaelen’s visions, their shadowed depths a siren’s call laced with dread.
At twenty-three, Kaelen left the Duskwind Clan, driven to unravel the truth of his dreams. Clad in weathered explorer’s garb, his healer’s toolkit proof of his skill in Battle Medicine, he roamed the wilds alone. His Unconventional Weaponry—the hornbow’s deadly arc—marked him as a warrior apart, blending human resolve with the eerie precision of Shae’s whispers. His Toughness carried him through trials that would break others, yet the Vaults’ call grew louder, a pulse in the dark.
Now, at twenty-five, Kaelen stands at the edge of the Abomination Vaults, his black eyes burning with resolve and unease. His corded hands grip his weapons with a predator’s ease; his scars, faint against his tanned skin, speak of battles won. He is a hunter who speaks the shadow’s tongue, a man shaped by a Tian Xia wanderer’s teachings and haunted by the undead’s whispers. The Vaults hold answers, but also horrors that could unmake him. As he steps into their lightless depths, the Shae language hums in his blood, and the shadows watch, their silence a promise of things older than gods.

I know the skin color and eyecolor is off theres some other off things off like architecture.
I will fix later if you like
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